incision too deep
make a purchase
no receipt
new oven works nice
little dent
burnt ice
death in my garden
why should I scrape the barrel's bottom
only the guilty get pardoned
scream common sense
no pennies
just holes in my privacy fence
how do some make friends with a genie
friendless with a password
open sesame
I was found before I hid
working too hard to own nothing
cement garbage can lid
Author notes
lucky doesn't strike me
A contest entry
- Show Me What You Got! by borrowing.moonlight.
400 points, ended May 27, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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first things first:
one warning
reread the rules because you're missing one or two things you have maybe 2 days before i will DQ you for not following the rules.
now on the actual poem-
omg that was so confusing! i will definitely have to come back and read that later but unfortunately the bell is about to ring.. wow that was um interesting. nice format and rhyme but ..wow. mkay well thanks for entering and please edit and add whats missing. (read the rules please)
thanks again, and good luck -
i just spent 2 points on you, lol
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U HAVE A GIFT!!!
whoa cow... this is crazy good. its sufisticated yet simple... you are amazing... i will give you a dollar. *gives you a dollar* LOL. i dont know, you seem pretty lucky to me, everything i write stinks worse than the garbage under that lid... very nice sweetie!
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hmm. its pretty good. its got a cool like mood to it.
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i think we could take this piece in MANY different ways but i liked it...truely
i feel really sympathetic for the persona
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wow that was interesting to me it sounded like a murder, correct me if I am wrong
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