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Spittin It Free Verse Live Video Spoken Word

Spittin It

By: Julia L. Clark

 

 

As my curls fall from my hair

And the air said beware

Of the spam ware of

Side affects of being a chic

So dope sick.

 

Sexy gloss arbor mist

Hips toss as your eyes

Watch a rhythm forecast

Pour yes more after

I shut the door of

Have I lost you

In the speed race

Of polyester

Fake aunt jamama

Sweating heat sauna

Of spit it girl

 

As I twirl my nappy hair fur

In to dread locks of

Fufu not mild but spicy

Roll the dice saucy hot

Mommy

 

Yes you must cop

That man you must

Bring it back

I am spittin authentic

Care for your ears

And chasing the wild word range

Like a wounded

Poet Rain dear.

 

Did I not make myself clear

When I shed tears

They are voiceless

With salt pain sounds

What mountain have I found

To throw the rage of expression

Through the way I can re edit my voice sounds

 

My side affects is life

With awaking chess

Mic check

I brush your knowledge

With Colgate

Brother slow down

My fingers off from a hard

Day of masturbate.

 

Not sexually but

Financially

So get your mind out the thesaurus

Gutter and be assistance to the struggling

Woman Government

Of I fuss and holler at our kids

And trying to show them

This life isn’t Hollywood show biz

 

And you cant be B2K Lil Fizz

Because when you don’t stand

For truth then your neck will be slit

Because you were scared to take

The pacifier out your babies mouth

And teach them its hectic

Not only down south

But I am a descendant of not

The U S but I am neo soul Africa

That is where my relatives were

Packed from and was mind enslaved

But I am not shaven your ass hairs

And I want be the one cooking as

The in house stroking mistress affairs

 

My baby isn’t completely

100% Africa because

The master was a stroking

Identity erasing bastard

You races against me

And I am apart of you

But through a few

Generations

 

My mentality is pissed

Because I am a woman

Black panther activist beast

At the least know the difference

Between spittin it and being

Racist hostess this just my

Mind fresh out the

Sweet bottles of

This society will

Rob you blind

 

~ Spittin It ~

Free Verse

Not A racist piece

If you didn’t get

What you read

You are lost

 

Neo Soul Artist

Julia L. Clark

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

Author notes

Spittin It Free Verse Live Video Spoken Word

Not a racist poem
Just my free verse quick thoughts
~ Julia ~
Background Provided By:Hollywood a.k.a.
http://allpoetry.com/Levesta

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 29, 2008

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    Potent In Spoken Word Motion..

    You speak through the realms of reality, from a distance no-one may ever know, but thanks to your free verse word flow, you let your soul of honesty overflow...as I enjoy reading, as well as learning the wisdom you have within you. Great job to all involved with this masterpiece, from the title on down. Know you are loved. Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      December 30, 2008

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      i was fresh out of rehab mushy gosh and funny you were talking to me personally helping me close to healing hon i tell you i want you to blow me away one day with the coldest white boy spoken word i want it in the spot light because its there i have been reading it and i know you can do it i know you can honey thanks when you do be one sound which means its mushy style dammit oh i cant wait


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    I Loved it like always and I loved ya doing it live sis !


  • Levesta
    July 15, 2008
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    LOVE IT AND LOVE THE LIVE VERSE EVEN BETTER WONDERFUL JOB SIS


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 14, 2008

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    It's always a pleasure to read your work
    here on this site and an even added bonus
    when you do something like this! I love
    to watch and listen to you do these
    "Spoken Word" pieces. It says a lot about
    you. I did not find this to be racist but,
    rather interesting. I love this background
    that you made of yourself! Lovely work sweetie
    and thanks a lot for sending this one my
    way! I hope to hear from you again very
    soon and take care!




    Jeremy0826


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 15, 2008
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      thanks J you know your jewels is crazy love you yea will give you a buzz when i have some sanity i will buzz tommorrow about to crash


  • AsIThink gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    Wow...this was the first piece I've read from you. I don't think I've ever read a 'Spoken Word' piece (even if its embrassing to say it...lol). I clicked for the "YouTube" link but it was gone (oh well). This was packed with energy and strong energy. I wouldn't bother with impressions others might get that its 'racist' because all-in-all, you were penning some 'rawness' (if that's a word...lol) and isn't this what expression includes?


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      May 23, 2008
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      thanks hon i just played it here its playing you have to hit the play button instead of going direct to you tube

      thanks and shame on you
      you never read the neo soul artist mrs jewels oh my i am crazy take care


  • cep2008
    May 21, 2008
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    hot

    That is on FIRE!!!That reminds of Maya Angelou and a little Sonja Blade no B.S.!


  • moluv10
    May 16, 2008

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    this is some true hot fire spit in here baby! You did your thing. I love the realness and the flow. Keep it up.


  • Ephiphany
    May 15, 2008

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    You know what...

    this is off tha chain, and in truth as your thoughts are broad in real life experiences. I didn't think it was a racist piece however you did cover some wonderful points and it was a great thing to disclose that clause in the beginning for those that obtain only a small usage of NOT thinking outside of the box Loved it, keep being you in keeping it or should I say spittin it...REAL

    All the best, it's what's up

    theLady


  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 15, 2008

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    spit it wifey spit it! you are right we are all one under one nation and i am mixed myself but mines don't show up as much but i am i liked it you did a great job i always love your live pieces you period drive me crazy i ever get close to you i am going to attack you


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    I like it

    it seems to have a good bit of rhyming to me. I guess you meant for it to be that way, because u were impressing me! l.o.l. j.k. keep doing your thing my friend!


  • kennethlaney
    May 14, 2008

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    Very Good

    I'm lost baby. LOL Very nicely done Julia. even got to hear it.

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