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Poets

Poets,
Don't just describe,
Poets paint a picture,
A picture that pulls you away,
From life,
Into,
Oblivion where,
You watch scattered words become,
Beautiful - looking effortless,
But hard,
I am,
Not a poet,
I am a girl who writes,
I write words and try to make them,
Clever,
I'm like,
A black flower,
A zebra with no stripes,
A clock that doesn't tell the time,
That's me

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Poets,
Don't just describe,
Poets paint a picture,
A picture that pulls you away,
From life,
Into,
Oblivion where,
You watch scattered words become,
Beautiful - looking effortless,
But hard,
I am,
Not a poet,
I am a girl who tries,
To make magic but sadly fails,
That’s me.

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  • just weak hands
    May 18, 2008
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    wow that was creative! i agree w. dreamana- u ARE a poet


  • Dreamana
    May 14, 2008

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    Wow, these are excellent words penned by one so young. You ARE a poet nicely done.

    If u get a mo, please review one of mine


  • ucancallmereal
    May 14, 2008

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    HEYYY THIS WAS A TOTALLY COOL POEM!! wow. that all makes sense.. wow. i just cant talk about it lol. well done!! you know you have a talent of making the reader truly understand what you think and what you go through.. awesome<3