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Sometimes

 Sometimes late at night I see your face in my mind,
thnking of all the memories that have been confined.

Sometimes I close my eyes wishing you were here,
only to hold you to have you near.

Sometimes I think of you kissing my lips,
with your hands ever so lightly grasping my hips.

Sometimes late at night I see your face in my dreams,
going down the road less traveled so it seems.

Sometimes I feel "where would I be without you",
empty and lonely without a clue.

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  • cursedwiththissoul
    May 14, 2008

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    i love the way you use the use of repetition with the word "sometimes". it really emphasises just how strongly you feel about this person. i think that this is a poem that everyone can relate to, in one way or another. amazing.