When she smiles,
You dont really know she is hurt.
When she smiles
You dont know she is anorexic.
When she smiles,
You dont know her dad left her.
When she smiles,
You dont know she loves someone.
When she smiles,
You dont know her wishes.
When she smiles,
You dont know her point of view.
When she smiles,
You dont know she hates herself.
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very sad poem
the repatition works really well -
i rele like this poem.
i rele like ur poem, the way it's written.
i understand it completely
and feel ur pain=/
ur a good writer
keep writing !
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THiS iS VERY BEAUTiFUL
i LOVE DEE WAY YOU KEEP DEE RYTHM AND DEE SUSPiCiON
[i KNO i LOVE iT] -
blood
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blood?? who are you?!
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I've felt like this before
I understand this poem... unlike you know Anna. I know who this is about...and I know you will never believe anyone else until you yourself realizes you are beautiful!I do love you Anna, so much and I hate to hear you being hurt. But you know what?! I am the same way.. so I can't say that but i do. I do have to go now and i want you to know ILYSMLAS, and I can talk to you tomorrow if you want okay? well I want to talk...just talk, see how things are with you. I LOVE YOU ANNA!
good poem though!
I know you like this smiley
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