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Your fingerprints rest on my skin..

Your fingerprints rest on my skin,
coating me in a warm embrase,
as i remember you and sleep alone,
the thoughts of you in my mind.

Alone without you i fall apart,
with no warmth, love and shelter you give me,
i crumble to life's pressure,
my heart feels so heavy in my chest.

Alone again, droplets of poison sting my cheeks,
a river and more i could cry for you,
pleeding and praying for your return,
as i fall again, breaking down once more.

So weak, without you here to hold me,
fragile and victim to my own mind,
thoughts i'd rather not think, come like plague,
swamping me in darkness of my doubt and dispair.

I fear that i may damage our relationship,
i have all the trust in the world for you,
but i still fear that you will let me go,
i just want to be safe in the knowledge that you want me here.

Save me from my mind, the doubt and the dred,
the tainted thoughts that pick appart my hope,
please stay with me and never let me go,
i need you to stay alive and resist letting go of life.

You are my saviour, my hope, and my prince,
you bare the love i need to keep me going,
you make me feel like i'm worth living, that i am something worthwhile,
give me the strength and make me complete.

So in this poem, i give to you, my eternal love,
and my ever lasting appologies, for what i may do,
i just ask that you keep in mind, and in heart,
that i will always love you.

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  • Scorpions Kiss
    August 23, 2008
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    this is an amazing write i really enjoyed reading it..amazing poem xx


  • Eternal-Dreamer
    May 16, 2008
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    wow a very emotive poem, i love your rythum and flow through it
    a great write keep going


  • pink cats fly
    May 16, 2008

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    awww there is so much love you are giving to scott!! a great write i like ''i have all the trust in the world for you'' and ''fragile and victim to my own mind''

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