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R.

As he slips out the front door,
He slips on his best face,
A glowing heart-warming smile,
To hide his empty heart.

The bruises he feels will never go away,
On the outside they're already gone.

He prays for the tears he knows will not come,
And vanishes into the night.
No one can see the pain in his eyes,
Through the dark tinted windows that his mask provides.

But as he turns around the corner,
His smile disappears showing his agony.
He drops upon his knees, head in his hands,
And a single tear hits the stony ground.

In the night only silence,
Till one single shot echoed.
Taking a fake smile,
From the lonliest world.

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R: It only takes one smile to hide a thousand tears.

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  • Midnite wolf gold member
    June 2, 2008
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    i really like this it is a very good write from the given prompt, thanks for entering


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 19, 2008
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    wow. fabulous write. your descriptive wording really capture the moment and scenario of this piece.


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    your prompt is - it only takes one smile to hide a thousand tears.
    good luck and have fun