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Result of Third Block Economics

And what's the worst you can do?
Slap me on the wrist,
tell me what a bad girl I've become?
  (What can I say?)
A bad excuse is better than none.
all this glory of your chosen one,
won't save the willingly condemned...
to spite every hail mary you can spit,
angels don't mourn the merciless.

Author notes

ehh. I have issues with this one and I'll be amazed if I keep it up for more than five minutes. So. We could call it a work in progress but I doubt it will get worked on, ever. =]

Give it to me =]

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  • InfiniteCaitlin
    May 23, 2008

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    I guess its because I know you but I see you in your work. And thats what I love about it. isee kayla standing there screaming out her bare true soul. God doll you are a genius!


  • vixenval
    May 14, 2008

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    its decent, kinda makes me wonder what you did and the context of the poem, very intriguing.
    I can relate to this on the highest level.