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A Fantasy

 Your the man of my dreams everything that I want and need,
my heart is yours to follow where you lead.

When you hold me I feel security and passion your touch is so soft and true,
so tell me why have I fallen for a man like you?

The way you make me feel I cannot express,
so many words to say so much to confess.

Your kiss melts every part of me,
if you would only open your heart then you would see.

I love you for the man that you are and for the man you want to be,
you and you alone have made me full of life and so carefree.

If only you could be mine,
I would love you forever through out space and time.

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  • The Cube
    May 14, 2008

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    A very sensual write and a good format with two lines each. Perhaps a good background would help it to stand out, but the poem in itself was very well done.