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Beautiful

Bright, vibrant colors
The worlds's true hidden treasures
Beautiful nature

Blossoming flowers
California's sloping hillsides
Beautiful nature

Created by him,
Crafted by his very hands
Beautiful God.

Author notes

three haikus. I know the last line only has 4 sylablles, but I felt it fit.

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  • Kelli Marie
    May 15, 2008

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    I love the chain of haiku. Very well written. It is alright that the last one is only four syllables, but the second one, in the second line has eight...still wonderful. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli