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Tears That Fall

The scars return day after day
At night they seldom go away
The deepest sleep gives some respite
From tears that fall night after night

Liquid pain upon my skin
Each memory, newly begin
Burning so deep, they shall remain
Upon my flesh ever ingrained

Author notes

"The only beauty on my body
are the scars I made myself"
~Michelle Campbell~(yours truely)

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  • Kiss the girl--x
    November 28, 2008

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    this is mega beautiful, and the rhyme fits it perfectly

    thanks for entering


    • faderman1959
      November 28, 2008
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      Thanks young lady! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just loved the flow of this for such a sad poem. I guess it creates the illusion of beauty for so much sorrow.


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 14, 2008
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    oops


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 14, 2008

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    great take on prompt... awesome job... thanks for sharing.. thanks for entering and good luck in contest....

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