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White SATIN...G-SPOT


 

 

Raging rivers

of Haikus in I Love you

mold my passion

into overflooded

ribbons

falling from the skies

of your eyes

staring into my space

of white castle

ecstacy

while I ride the tides

into the sunset

of

Get your Panties wet..

indeed he did,

of

Mocha Latte's

screaming

orgasms

of

midnight rendezvous

as I try to hold on

slipping

 

d

e

e

p

e

r

 

into the abyss

of clits

being licked

like a banana

split

right down the middle

of his face

running the race

of

fast paced;

My

erotic king

of white satin

Gspots

as the stain

sets...upon

his mind

in returning

back to me

for

Part II.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

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  • queen Moderators member
    May 26, 2008
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    Good luck in the contest Very hot poem


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    May 26, 2008
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    Thanks for entering

    definitely hot lol.

    Thanks
    Tammy


  • cep2008
    May 19, 2008
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    i need a cold shower

    This poem is intimate I like where u r going with this.


  • WhiteRoses
    May 19, 2008
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    This is very sexy. Very nicely written erotica.


  • Sarah957
    May 18, 2008
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    This is steamy! My favorite part was midnight rendezvous

    as I try to hold on
    slipping deeper into the abyss.

    The way you lined up the letters in deeper mounted the tension in the poem. The banana split running down his face part kind of grossed me out but maybe I'm just a pansy. LOL


  • catz Moderators member
    May 17, 2008

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    This is HOT!! I can hardly believe you wrote this beautiful, long, erotic poem and nary a need to wash your mouth out with soap

    A superb piece and I wish you luck in the contest

    Dee

  • Warrior7
    May 16, 2008

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    ohhhhhh my this is fabulous, i love it because even though it's an adult poem you have written it with taste therefore making it an excellent read. Great work was worth the wait.


  • Galaxy2
    May 15, 2008

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    Wow...

    'staring into my space
    of white ecstasy'...
    I'd love to do that.
    'while I ride the tides
    into the sunset'...
    so would I.
    'Get your Panties wet'...
    I'm already wet honey! What about you?
    'screaming'...
    I want more, my love!
    'orgasms'...
    yes...multiorgasm
    'I try to hold on
    slipping
    d
    e
    e
    p
    e
    r
    into the abyss
    of clits'...
    What a splendid journey!
    Take me with you, sweetie!
    'being licked like a banana'...
    I'd prefer to lick like an icecream...
    or chocolate...

    Thank you, my sweet chocolate beauty!

    Kisses...all over!

    Galaxy2





  • HaleyMary
    May 15, 2008

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    Wow, Sis. This was sizzling. This was very sensual and expressed powerful emotion. The part of the banana split reminded me of a poem I wrote a few years back, but took down when I left for awhile back in 2007. I had a poem titled Banana Cream, which was metaphorical, but none of my readers got it at the time.

    Anyway, thanks for sharing your talent and best of luck in the contest.


  • moluv10
    May 15, 2008

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    I must say Piff, you definately have a way with words... This sensual write has my mind all over the place... I love it! Best of luck in the contest.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 15, 2008

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    ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh nice for the eyes yay! I commented first this whole set up is a trap you are being forbidden piffy! its heated blow this candles out have some sympathy for the damn readers who have hot asses i loved it

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