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To My Muse On His Hiatus!

"Where ya been old friend?"
"I've got despair

making a monkey
out of my back,
loneliness is wringing
my heart out like a rag
soaked in bitter tears,
and age just bent a couple of
wrinkles round my smile."

"The world's at war,
and I'm feeling guilty,
just another old warrior,
left  home to read it in the news."

"You're usually around
at times like these,
though you do have the habit,
of being a rhymer with amnesia
or a couplet severed
from it's lesser half."

"I can easily forgive
your absenteeism,
But I can't forget
what it's left me with."

"I need to right
what's skewed,
I need the rite
of passages,
short and lengthy,
I simply need to write,
I am a Cheech
without your Chong,
I am a song
without your voice."


"And please pardon 
this humble attempt
to invite your return,
But without your input,
I am just a hack."

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    a hack>>?? i think not... but i did enjoy this little ditty with your muse... nicely done
    many thanks for entering this contest
    G.x

  • NurseChilly gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    left align please!! thanks