A touch, soft and tender.
A whisper, full of desire
A gasp of sweet surrender
As passion fuels the fire
No words spoken between them
No promises to be kept
No lies being told tonight
No looking back - no regrets
Longing to hold each other
Such precious little time
Both vowed to another
Being lonely their only crime
Tomorrow bringing sorrow
A brief moment of shame
With the memory of this one night
A release from passion's flames ........
Author notes
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A contest entry
- sex,scr*wing,f*cking by madilin101.
400 points, ended May 15, 2008, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow , reall y awesome luv hit the nail on the head so to speak ty xx
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Very passionate, loved the last few lines :
"Tomorrow bringing sorrow
A brief moment of shame
With the memory of this one night
A release from passion's flames "
thanks for sharing =]
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Wow...I loved the poem's sensuality and its mildness as well. Sometimes less detail is more and in this case its a homerome. Excellent.
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i really like this
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really good poem...what option did you use btw?
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I guess I read this before and never commented! This is really good sweetie. I love the flow and it's amazing. Well done on such a sex write
Love you!
Mylee -
This is very good. I love the meaning of it.. it is very deep.
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wow nice flow and this is very touching....its all about sex but makes it sound so sweet, loving and gentle......
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Oh my god! I love your style of writing, it flows perfectly, and it sounds so natural... a very touching write...lol. A very, very pleasing read!
Emma ^_^
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