I watch the news and what's the hurry,
To go back to our lives when I worry,
That it will be the same again,
No this is not a promised heaven,
Seek up the tides of change,
We always run back here,
But when we finally come home,
I'll be writing the same poem,
What makes you think that I am happy?
When you're everything that makes me sad,
What makes me so damn lonely?
When you turn ugly when you are mad,
All I love is killing me...
Revenge is sweet it makes me bad...
Look at me when you say,
You're never going away,
Look at me when you stay,
You're always in my way...
Author notes
Penz~~
A contest entry
- Titles and Quotes Options--FINAL EXTENSION by Viyanna Rosemarie.
300 points, ended June 5, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Not a bad poem at all
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sory I rhyme in the second line of the first verse seem crafted and not natural. the over all poem is good because it carries the pain the writer fel
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