The moon shines bright tonight
Just like those nights before
Those nights we laid under the stars
The moon shone bright
The moon shines bright tonight
Just like those nights before
Those nights we shared secret kisses in the dark
The moon never told
The moon shines bright tonight
Just like those nights before
Those nights have now passed
Tonight the moon mourns
The moon shines bright tonight
Just like those nights before
Those nights are just a memory
Tonight the moon watches over us both
A contest entry
- Options Contest by Simply Simple.
1000 points, ended June 7, 2008, 83 entries
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Comments
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It seemed like the repetition was just a filler for lack of things to say. Especially in a poem this short. It was pretty good. Although, the picture didn't fit terribly well with the poem. I felt te picture have a more eerie sense to it. Either way, nice work.
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