Oh God
you are a maestro of painting
with a specialized serenading classical
while I simplify a matting
built by the sandalwood
at tinting
you operate the nature
coloring it
by the fingers of sublimity
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Picture Inspirational by Kelli Marie.
2300 points, ended May 15, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This poem was a great take on the prompt I loved this how you painted the image and how you remind the reader that it is God who created this beauty before our eyes great write and thank you for sharing this piece with us.
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The wonderful, peaceful words speak to my sometimes wayward heart. God's creation is always a sure fire escape! Its odd that after many years, medical professionals have finally discovered its theraputic values.
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this is really nice
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a comfort found through darkness indeed yet
Congratulations on a truly pleasing piece
there is the inexcusable eye to see other than "you are a maestro of painting" with what's fitting as touching -- enthusiasm to not fall away from the hold of Theo-. such artistry restoration is even to come, first not having his name smeared but beautifully acknowledged with causal continuing clarification as Psalm 83:18 echoes the rhythmic outwardness of Jehovah. Isaiah reflected direct confidence by his appelation pointing out higher reference and verse 26:4 of such emphasis forwarding ~
I love how you show his works are echoed with "you operate the nature" and such associative chain reactions can even gather inserted reconciliation with our friendliness to him for earth through his son for guidance and repair from what Adam broke. Luke 22:42,43 entails closure in 'And he went on to say: “Jesus, remember me when you get into your kingdom.” 43 And he said to him: “Truly I tell you today, You will be with me in Paradise.”' we have been availed the linking of realistic overlooking. We aren't left to just drift from the positive pasture, even have a resprung garden closed from negativity as denial of God but needing seeding of truth. dew of night with our due do too. advancement with nourishment and softening readiness from basis.
your second stanza is soft sideline, grateful for what to be looked at,
babies are my subject -
This is lovely. God has the great hand of masterpiece, and His touch is perfect. I enjoyed your work. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
Kelli -
Excellent!
Great thought, and the choicest of words that reveal it....
I loved "a specialized serenading classical
" the most.
Congrats and best regards!
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...Being a single instrument in the orchestra...You painted a lovely image here yourself, poet. Peace, Rhonda
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I find my peace here, in your words. Thank you. Love, Lane
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