Auras conflict causing illusions
Testiments contradict, causing confusion
The words are non-sensical
People looking institutional
More customers in the hotel
Seeking redemption from hell
My morals defy the sacred pain
Snorting another line of cocaine
Sea signals death, eating away the shore
I look down at the screw up, all the gore
Falling away from the mainstream
I'm supporting the losing team
Juding my evil through fear and lust
Their bibles remain buried in dust
Envy and jealousy, greed and glory
Shut up about your Jesus story
Christ is dead, he failed
Hands and feet and head impaled
Open up the pearly gates
See the demons leer with hate
Here's a suprise you didnt expect
Angels hanging with ropes around their necks.
Is this too hardcore?
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not too hardcore at all
a little dark but its pain and gothic horror makes it beautiful i love it. good write! -
also very deep se, i think its excellent and explains so much!
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INCREDIBLE, i can relate. i loved it. i just loved it. so so so so strog. amazing. well done.
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Woah
This is AMAZING! i love it, its not to hard core, its a cold hard dose of much needed reality to MANY ppl, i hope more ppl read it so they can see how great it is, GREAT JOB!!
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i love it it smakes sense and it a flash of reality every inch honest
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no, i think its good! very dark. i like it! i think you did a good job.
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Yes its pretty hardcore
Through drugs with blinders on
the devil holds you hostage you know
Taking thoughts of good and love
replacing them causing self destruction
When there was a time
so young with hope within your eyes
In trusting all yet the home not true
look at what it has done to you
Know that if you take the drugs away
you would see love instead of hate
Kick that old devil in the rear
and know life would be good and forever my dear
Its sad this write yet visions those who takes drugs are given .Where the mind becomes warped to only see the bad in life . Even the worst addict still carries within the means to love and be loved if only the drugs were left behind .
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Hell yeah!!! This is awesome! A great work of art and a grand piece of honesty! Yes!!! Oh wow! I'm in love with your mentality!
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