I don’t know why this restriction is upon me
Yet hours to come tie me up even more
A soulless person could smile genuinely
Without dripping pain from this barbed wire
I’ll let you feel what I don’t know I feel
Once I’m able to live with this restraint
The light helps to conceal
When I despite the torture don’t almost faint
The world is a chaos and always erratic
Though I cannot reach out
Around me it’s so quiet yet dramatic
Dead calm yet so loud
A contest entry
- My opinion about honesty. by Naridill.
900 points, ended May 22, 2008, 5 entries
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Interesting imagery through out. Simple yet the message marks along nicely.
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Contradiction is the natural state of things.
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