This boy climbed and stood on a wall
He felt so obese, and unloved he wanted to end it all
Everytime he looked in the mirror
He wanted so much to become thinner, but as he stared
The pavement it was unfavored
By broken glass, and jagged rocks by the cement
He didn't care what would happen to him
As he jumped he fell
As he thought of the hell
That was especially inflicted by him
All the people who made him pale, and that laughed at him
He figured he was better off dead
All they did was treat him like shit
When all the school teachers, and all
The school's children couldn't figure
What to do with the crushed in head, and partly dismembered torso
That was left on the floor for them.
A contest entry
- Make A Fairy Tale Into Emo,Goth.... by black hearted rebel.
450 points, ended May 16, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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I love this!But you didnt tell me the name of the fairy tale?
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the name
humpty dumpty
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