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~* Dared with Determination *~ (Empowered Earthstar)

 

 

 



Underneath the canopy of celestial offerings,
I reminisce with wind circling
and your verses singing, soothing me
after inhaling depths of Imagination
penned to papyrus; virtual quill fluttering
you layered lovingly.

We walked together, line by line talking
through pictures you pulled from Heart
also Spirit speaking in part
from personal experiences shared to relate,
instill with conviction, a reason to start
following the path presented as one smart
direction to take before it's too late.

You dared to travel the distance,
showed without a doubt, Doctors were wrong
when some tried to limit how Strong
and Determined you proved to be, resistance
to the word: Quit~ you sang your sweet song.
I like many others, believed in you all along.

Life seen as a Gift on this Earth, even when
Angels summoned, called for precious contents
to be delivered without warning, the Heart laments
but Brenda~ know you have hands extended again
for fingers to grasp, fear not my Friend.

Blessed are we with memories, treasured presents.
Love lasts beyond barriers, Sacred~ never forgotten.










 

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I am sorry for Your loss and hope our words can bring forth comfort during these challenging times~
You are Loved and Appreciated for ALL You are
and ALL You do!

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  • earthstar
    December 3, 2008

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    Thank you it made me cry it was so wonderful. The beauty of your words were feeling I would not let myself think about. I have shut myself away. Some times I feel like the people in my life go so fast it feels like every thing I touched wilts. I truly love this poem would like to talk to you,when you have time
    love b


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Very goos work here

    This is a wonderful piece of work and tenderly written

  • earthstar
    May 27, 2008
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    Thank you this is very lovely it full of hope and comfort. Your words bring forth a comfort.Thank you for your caring words of comfort. You are right it a challenging time.


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    SO TENDER AND LOVING!!!

    Such sweet words which will lift her heart and brighten her spirits.


  • StarEyes
    May 17, 2008

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    Thanks for you entry into this contest!! I love this! I am sure Brenda will as well.

    This is a beautiful entry and well I found some comfort in it as well, for which I thank you!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nettie

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