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A Brand New Beginning

Welcome to the Universe,
Absent of the divine,
Accidental perfection,
Such a beautiful lie to believe in,

The beginning began with a bang,
Run away, Run way, I'll attack,
The light bringers fall,
With a brand new name,


With a command,
The sun stood quietly in the dark,
It's time to set myself on fire,
And then there was light,

All the while,
Man sprang forth from clay,
In the Barrens only dirt reigned,
This is the life on mars,

Under the burning sun,
Look at the red changes in the sky,
A home for nothing alive,
Man sorrowfully left with no memories of why,

Stand out on the edge of the earth,
On his face is a map of the world,
Man pondered,
Where does your garden grow?

The Sun seeking the ocean,
Wondered its existence,
Twelve hours later,
On with the mission Over the hill,

And night fell on man,
Seeking the sun,
Man went to the sea,
There they met the water,

Water made the offer,
Selling the secrets to the sun,
Man whispered for relief,
And a blanket of raindrops covered man,

From the prophets,
Three came,
Offering the mother of the sun,
A Buddha for Mary,

In appreciation,
She gave the three,
The rings of the trinity,
Thus was the end of the beginning.



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#6 TheGoldenPath "A Beautiful Lie" by 30 Seconds To Mars
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  • Simply Simple
    June 6, 2008

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    I love the incorporation of song names and lines by 30 seconds to mars into this. that really caught my attention. I loved this. it was quite original. Nice idea. Thanks for entering.