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Lost in Summer Memories.

Softly aways the warmest breeze

Under shaded bliss I lounge at ease.

Mumurings of cicadas abound

Music to my heart surrounds.

End of day and sunset glows

Reminders of God's hand does show.

 

Dancing waves upon seashore

Race the tides, rockpools explore

Each ripple brings a laugh and smile

Always does the sea beguile.

Making the most of balmy days

Images painted with dawn's fresh rays

Nature's pride will always shimmer and shine

God's mighty sway, a grand design.

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  • second-born
    August 25, 2008

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    "Nature's pride will always shimmer and shine
    God's mighty sway, a grand design." - Wow! What a very amazing acrostic that brings out the nature's majestic beauty durinig summers...truly I would be lost in 'summer memories'....God bless!


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    Congratulations on the bronze! I liked the 2nd stanza best - all your sea images/memories made me smile!
    Marlene


  • Frozentearz
    May 22, 2008

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    As always a delight to have you within one of our contest, May God always bless us all with his mighty sway and grand design,
    Blessings.
    Frozentearz


  • peridotPixi
    May 19, 2008

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    this poem is really cool i like the background and love the details you have put into this nice flowing acrostic, good luck in the contest, keep up the great writing, -Amy

  • Mailservhr
    May 15, 2008
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    Mad Hatter says its Awesome

    I'm wondering how come I never write anything this good.

  • Greystrokes
    May 15, 2008

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    Very Nice!

    A very nice acrostic Gaylene that flows very well. Good luck in the contest
    Mark


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    Wonderful rhythm and images--like a beautiful song. Good luck in the contest!


  • The Poetic Angel
    May 14, 2008

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    butiful acrostic with a great rhyme to go wif it

    good luck in the contest

    xxx cheeky xxx


  • Frogzter gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Makes me want to run on down to the beach! Love the imagery you packed into this delighful piece on Summer dreams!

    Always does the sea beguile... so very true!

    Thanks for entering and best wishes!

    Frogz~

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