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September Shadow

brothers
constant alert
responded to nightmare
rushed into crumbling inferno
to rescue World Trade Center terrorized
buried heroes paid highest price
comrades clawed in rubble
few firemen found
brothers







Author notes

Firemen Raising the Flag at WTC photograph by Thomas Franklin
found on art.com.
Border images differ from other background.
Images taken from art.com and www.september11news.com/FDNYFireman.
Photographers' names were not mentioned.


Background free to use on AP.

Border width custom set at 230.

Poem is a rictameter.

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  • Sharcu Greeters member
    June 29

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    Right back at ya with the bronze! Congratulations! Also, nice poem


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 28

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    Wow.. This is really amazing.. you did a wonderful job.. the images are so haunting.. I'm really speechless.. Thank you very much for sharing.. you did such a wonderful job!! best of luck..

    Angel

  • Hetha gold member
    June 19

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    This background is fantastic! Your poetic piece brilliant, poignant and sad all at once. Kudos for being able to do this in rictameter, that's impressive! Good luck in the contests.


  • maralisa gold member
    June 6
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    wow this is wnderful congratulations on your honor

  • Wow. What a beautiful background for the 9/11 tributes
    Congrats on the HM this won


    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • debilynn gold member
    May 24

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    FANTASTIC!!!

    great poem! vivid use of imagery. love the background. it lends much strength to your poem. makes it more meaningful. you are very talented. keep writing and designing sister! God bless you always


  • spiffyspat
    May 23

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    You're tribute to 9/11 is very heartfelt. It's a different style than I'm used to reading and you do it incredibly well. I can almost feel the pain you're describing.
    -- Jae

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  • To the brave resucers that tried to find those that died and died themselves the loss was great. It was a black day that September day...no one will ever forget for we all watched it happen over and over that sad say!

    ~Sie

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  • paw-writer silver member
    May 23

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    A beautiful tribute to those who sacrifice for all of us everyday. This is a very unique and touching border and background you have here. Nice job! Blessings, Patty

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  • Superb

    A very fine write and tribute. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
  • Mirthryl
    May 14

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    Outstanding tribute rictameter and background, excellent border photo selections. A national tragedy, responded to with heroism by so many.

  • a good border to use for poems on this topic and of course many do have poems on this sad day where many died.

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