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NURSEY, NURSEY please....

NURSEY, NURSEY…please

Nursey,  nursey…’I’m thirsty’
‘then drink the tea I’ve brought for you’

Nursey, nursey…’can you hold it to my lips, in case I spill’
‘well, just take sips’…’OK  I will’

Nursey, nursey…’I can’t reach it, can you pass it?’
‘No, it’s just there by your hand’

Nursey, nursey…’I think it’s cold, could you warm it up for me’
‘then you’ll have to wait until I’m free’
‘I’m very busy here you see’

Nursey, nursey..’then I’ll come and help, I could be your pet’
‘get back into bed before you get soaking wet’

Nursey, nursey..’how will that happen and occur as there is no wind or rain in here’
‘because I may just be tempted to throw your tea all over you’

‘Nursey, nursey.I’m sorry but I thought that you would like a caring touch with a heart that feels some flattering words to brighten your sparking eyes and even to deliver you a wonderful surprise’

Nursey, Nursey..’please don’t look that way at me eyeing so very suspiciously’

From Nursey, nursey…’then you dear patient ~ just drink your tea!!’

Much tongue in cheek

©  written by Libithina

Author notes

A dialogue between ~ A seasoned, dedicated and experienced nurse dealing with the light harrassment from an adoring patient...she loves them all and has seen and heard it all before ... Much tongue in cheek lol she would never tip the tea over his head

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 18, 2008

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    They probably have to go through this way too often. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    Know about what you are talking! Dealt with children in pediatrics...They tried to drive us nuts, but were not successful..I can well imagine the scene! Good write!


    • libithina
      October 18, 2008
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      Oh dear pediatrics you must have been run off your feet
      Thankyou so much dear Rose mary angel x x x


  • Lady Australis silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    lol
    cute poem


  • daviscth silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    LOL. I bet sh'ed like to though! I enjoyed this a lot sweetie. Good luck in the contest.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    libithina

    LOL SOme nurses put up with lots of crap hehe. Nice write Dear. Good luck with it.


    • libithina
      May 14, 2008
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      Thankyou my dear for the reading of it .. I am so very glad you enjoyed s


  • Melodies
    May 14, 2008

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    Oh, truly adorable... cute and delightful!

    What fun here, as the reader follows the scampy patient around and listens to the dialogue. Clever and warm hearted!


    • libithina
      May 14, 2008
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      hehehe yes indeedy that scampy patient
      and patient nursey besides lol
      much much

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