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The mytstery woman unclothed

Beauty is where you find it
Be it a naked womans body..
Begging to be touched and caressed
      or
Natures beauty...
Such as the captivating red rose!
One day...
While walking in a forest nearby,
I came upon a maiden fair...
One like you only see in fairy tales.
She was basking in the sunlight
    but her voluptous body was bare.
She had shunned her clothing all
And had only one thing in her hand
Clutched between her beautiful round breasts...
It was a half-opened red rose.

dragonheart1

Author notes

i will finish this poem later..my thoughts were
interupted by having to go to work.

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    a sweet little piece, it's not really conversational though?? but i liked the little intriuging journey..
    many thanks for entering this contest
    G.x


  • NurseChilly gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    can you left align your piece, forgot to put that in the rules but will do from now

    and check your spellings