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The End

What's it like
To be afraid?

Eyes darting back & forth,
Sweaty palms desperately trying
To hold onto something.
Anything.

Blood drained from your face
Eyes overflowing with tears
Of regret.
Of guilt.
Of fear.

You feel a dangerously soft brush
Across your clammy white fingers
A scream fills the empty hall
& you realised it was from your trembling lips
That a scream so genuinely afraid
Was let out into the piercing silence

The monster is fast approaching.

The monster of your nightmares.

It came for you. Only you.

 

Your heart becomes numb,

Your mind silently betraying you,

Telling you that you lose.

 

What's it like to be afraid?
It's a game where you go insane.

 

The end.

 

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  • aboomer silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this - great job on the trophies!
    However, per the rules and in fairness to others who enter, would you please submit something that has no existing trophy?
    Thanks


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    Very nice poem for the picture prompt, and subject should meet her request for the contest too, good luck
    VOE


  • Luckintheshadows
    September 9, 2008

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    Feeling this right to my bones....as one who suffered night-terrors till I was about 14 I can relate to this on a purely emotional level. So utterly frightening, your imagery is fantastic!!! Thank you for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 26, 2008

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    real vivid, would never want to find myself stuck here, in a place where hell seems almost appealing.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 11, 2008
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    Very eerie...isn't revenge bweautiful though and hurting is worth it all after everyones hurt you.

  • bloodpoetry
    June 20, 2008

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    I had planned on entering this contest, but after your poem and the 2nd poem I think I'll save myself the trouble.
    I have been in the same shoes as the person in your poem.

    The flow has great.
    Good luck.


  • Kristin Melissa
    June 19, 2008

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    Koodles, I like this it is a wonderful poem, and a great idea for part of a story. Good luck in the contest.
    Blessed be
    Mystic


  • KristyBrainsikk
    June 16, 2008
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    I like it!


  • myusikah
    June 16, 2008

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    I like this. But I'm wondering...Wasn't this in a contest that I had?
    I was just wondering, why it's gone, or if you did take it out. I'm sorry. It just feels kind of strange. Well I like this a lot! And that is indeed a great discription of fear.
    -->pia♫♪

  • poetrytoopeneyes
    May 15, 2008

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    Wow, great description of such fear.

    I have one correction for you though that I'd like to get out of the way. On line 24 change "You mind silently" to "You*r* mind silently"

    But yes... Great write! Such strong feeling in this. Good luck in the contests!


  • infernalxfidelity
    May 15, 2008

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    oh my god...that gave me goosebumps. it was really really awesome. good images and ideas.

    good luck!

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