You are the hand that rocks the cradle,
You are the peace that comes from a smile,
You care for the lonely, the sick and the dying,
You visit the prisoner, give time to a friend.
You're faithful in good times as well as in bad,
You speak words of kindness to those who are sad,
You wipe the brow of the one who has failed,
Whose determined efforts have nothing gained.
A contest entry
- One word, 10 entries. by Xombii.
470 points, ended May 14, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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This poem has a really nice rhyme to it.
Good luck in my contest!
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Very smooth in flow A nice read thank you so much
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Thank you
I'm pleased you liked it - thanks for your comment.
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I love this a lot.
There are many ways love can be seen, and you showed them beautifully.
Thank you for entering.
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Thank you!
Thank you for honouring this poem with Gold! Thanks for such a good contest, Harriet
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a good positive piece on the word love, aye it can be kind and caring, smiling and dancing with compassion.
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Thanks a million
Thank you for your positive comments. Harriet
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