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Serenity Now

My mind fills with vibrant images of iridescent radiance

Their essence resplendent as they dance across my vision

To enlighten and heighten the spiritual senses of my body

Awakening divine energy, long dormant since eternity.

Cosmic swirls of power leave shades of elegance,

Streaming across the blackness, of an ornate midnight sky

As they tour the heavens on an intergalactic journey

Leading souls across the link between time and space

Until all becomes one in a union of ultimate perfection.

A contest entry

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  • aboomer silver member
    July 10, 2008

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    Lovely words and images in this! I especially like,
    'Leading souls across the link between time and space
    Until all becomes one in a union of ultimate perfection' - great depth and wisdom.
    Well done! Congrats. on the HM.


  • Desire gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Serenity Now
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times like I do with every piece- I kept wanting to cry
    I am feeling a sense of loss...for some reason when I was reading...I was feeling like there is a person missing in Life getting for some reason...feels like a mother figure
    I am seeing like a shooting star and a wish made-
    praying like for a wish to come true...hearing:
    a sign from God~
    Hopefully this makes sense~ I had to stop for the energy so overwhelming
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    To enlighten and heighten the spiritual senses of my body
    Awakening divine energy, long dormant since eternity.
    Magnificent Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~


  • Silenced one
    May 16, 2008

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    I love this. I can see the images of space that you describe so clearly. Best of Luck in the Contest.

    SILENCED ONE