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Chained to the Open Air

What am I to you.
A tainted prisoner
A little kid
To lock behind steel walls
Give me a feast and then starve me
Give me your words and crush them
Protecting me,
Sealing.
Me.
In.
My.
Head.
Away from you
Maybe someday I'll be gone from here
Disappear
And return to who
Everyone is waiting for...

Author notes

POP QUIZ!! This one is hard.

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  • liduen silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    uuuummmm....no idea...I think you have to give me an F on this one teacher! I love how you emphasized the words me in my head. This is a really good poem with an interesting, provacitive title.


  • riasme
    May 14, 2008

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    hmm...tough. i dunno. this is really good and it makes you think hard btw, you spelled disappear wrong ^^UU nice poem!


    • DeadlyTurnip
      May 14, 2008
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      Thank you for catching that!! Lol it's fixed now.

      As for the riddle? Muahaha...