I call upon the moon
to always ease your mind
I call upon the stars
to be mine loving eyes
To watch over you
when you go to sleep
to try and comfort you
when ever you're in need
I call upon the wind
to guide my goodnight kiss
so please do me a favour
and make sure it's recieved
I call upon Zion
to be withn your dreams
so heavenly thoughts
may be as they seem
Now I make a promise
that I intend to keep
I can make your dreams come true
so have a good night's sleep
Author notes
this one was to make up for the spelling mistakes in "bedtime"
A contest entry
- Lullabies (Pif) by Olivias Violin.
300 points, ended May 30, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Sweet dreams
Comments
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This is such a lovely uplifting write. I really loved reading through this and it gave me such a lovely feeling. Well done for this.
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Nice!
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Bravo
You did a really good job hun..
I really liked this.. the imagery was nice
And the emotion in your words was really sweet..
Best of luck hun..
Angel
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well done
I liked this one, nicely thought out.
good luck to you in the contest.
Cheers
Grey
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