Beautiful (if she did but know it).
A kind, thoughtful, and caring poet.
While she may not agree, she will not judge
(that’s her philosophy and she just won’t budge)
Funny, sexy, looks great in black.
A person I’d want to keep in the sack.
The softest lips that I’ve ever kissed
(I found that out on our first tryst).
A mother who gives all for her child.
A lover who drives me pleasantly wild.
A daughter who cares for her mum.
(Did I say she’s got a fantastic bum?)
A patient worker (she’s not killed her boss yet).
An animal lover (just go ask the vet).
So much love she learned about football.
Quite short, but she sure stands tall.
She has a mind that can seem so dark,
(but who said life was a walk in the park?)
Yet for all her killers, and horror, and blood,
It’s plain that she couldn’t be anything but good.
So full of hope that the world can change.
One who finds politicians quiet strange.
A Musketeer that deserves a place in the sun,
as she cries "One for all, and all for one."
Author notes
This is written for My beautiful pet.
Together now for 55,633,920 seconds, and for millions more to come!
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
1000 points, ended June 20, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Aww, this is so so so sweet!! You have done a wonderful job in penning this great dedication for her. She's listened to my fears, cries, and more. I am very grateful for her and her friendship. This I know touched her heart. You did wonderful
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she listens very well, I am glad she was a help to you
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THAT WAS JUST BRILLIANT. WONDERFUL WRITING HERE. I LOVE THE RHYME TOO. THE FLOW AND EVERYTHING WAS AMAZING. SUCH LOVE YOU DISPLAY FOR YOUR PARTNER HERE. WONDERFUL. I AM SURE TATTS WILL LOVE THIS.
WELL DONE INDEED.
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE LEON
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Thank you, I was quite pleased with the flow myself
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This is quite a wonderful poem you wrote for our 3rd musketeer, even though the first two of us are Tweedledee and Tweedledum
beautiful poem Dennis. you two are so wonderful together and it's quite evident the love and admiration you have for each other. i think you have her pegged quite well here in everything you've written. i really liked the part about her boss too as she is always bitching about him
your author notes kind of touched me too, that took some calculation dear 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thanks a lot for your comment
Love and admiration isn't the half of it! -
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I know dear, I know
p.s. love the border on the background too damn she's gorgeous 
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O wow Dennis.. this is an amazing write and the love and admiration that you have for her shines through every single word!
Every so often one comes across a couple that are meant to be.. any your union is such!
This is a very special glimpse into a unique and exquisite relationship!
Love you both
Naids
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Thanks a lot Naids, I totally agree that we were meant to be.
Sorry you couldn't make it to the Moot last night, I hope you are feeling a bit better.
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~tears in eyes~
i love You, i love You more than i could EVER express ... thank You a million times for this - You mean the world to me and just knowing that You enjoy me in Your life makes me content in the world
i love You FOREVER
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"Enjoy you in My life"?
you ARE My life!
I LOVE YOU!!!!!
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