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constellations stadia

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A cluster of space dust,
probably stars-

glow on and off
at the end of our road,

and you allowed goodwill to touch
the fragrance of being with me.

In the name of valor
and unconditional love:

'I am willing to wait
from the otherside of universe'.















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  • sense surreal
    July 30, 2008

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    'I am willing to wait
    from the otherside of universe'

    i so admire the patience
    if you can wait then it's really true love

    just hope all guys has this patience
    and not to rush things out


    Anna Lee


  • Desire gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: constellations stadia
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times, I kept getting words like: Flash Gordon and strangely enough: American Gladiators.
    for some reason I was seeing: Orcs...
    Now clear as day...seeing faces of Orcs~
    Hopefully this makes sense~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    In the name of valor
    and unconditional love:

    'I am willing to wait
    from the otherside of universe'.
    Magnificent Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~


  • tara wilson gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    beautiful

    a beautiful night & stars, and that is a long time to be willing to wait for someone..wow..