The bridge that beholds my future
Beckoning me forward
although i do not wish
to know what it holds
what i have in store
i would rather it be a secret
I shall not play God
yet wait for him to call me
Then, shall i know
What way i shall go
A contest entry
- ~* The Bridge to... *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Bridge to my future...
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times, I kept getting this feeling of~You are right~ then so mote it be
and seeing a cedar chest closed shut and locked
with key placed in Sacred place...
Seeing a hand put in shirt~ next to chest~
Hopefully this makes sense~
Powerful images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and pulled~
what i have in store
i would rather it be a secret
I shall not play God
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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I'm really glad you got a lot of images from my poetry. That is what i have seen in the bridge when i first looked upon it. Although it looks so mystifying and beautiful, your future may be bleak if you tamper with it, you see?
Also, I am 4months pregnant and this was at the backof my mine while i was looking at the bridge. I do want to know what sex i am having but i am afraid it will ruin a beautiful surprise...
Thank you for the honourable mention.... it made me feel really good!
...xxx
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