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Simplicity

Many words
spoil the meaning of a story
but a concise message
can tell a worthwhile tale

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    So true and extremely clever.... x


  • Lucy.
    May 14, 2008
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    Ah, very true, and clever use of the words. Good luck in the contest.