As I look upon my life in wonder.
I see the world in all its blunder.
To see and feel and truly know,
To get through lifes highs and lows.
The path to the world unknown,
Is now the path I chose to own.
Author notes
Just got married to day so kinda made me think of Lifs decisions.
Also have to give credit where credit is due, Jesse Earle for this beautiful inspirational picture.
A contest entry
- ~* The Bridge to... *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Beyond Unknown
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading~ which I did several times...I wanted to say Congratulations on Your New Beginnings with Marriage
Now I read again and kept getting~ troubled waters..
hearing words: troubled waters...but also phrase:
sail the high seas-you and me...
like this feeling of working together to brave the currents- (also NOT to point fingers...hear him out..there is more than meets the eye)
Getting reference to baby...when the time comes
it will come-not to force~
Hopefully this makes sense~
Powerful images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and pulled~
The path to the world unknown,
Is now the path I chose to own..
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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first I want to say congratulations. These words are very befitting [world unknown is now the path I chose to own]But...ermmmm....if you just got married today, shouldn't you have some other fun than writing? just kidding. Best wishes in the contest,
reenie
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