There are dreams written upon stars;
our hearts painted upon petals
as wind tangles wishes
within our tresses on our first Springs
and these pebbles that we stumble upon
are only growing pains nourished by our love
withstanding another Winter,
and every aching Season apart
until breezes scatter seeds to sow
blooming a path of promise
upon the wings of destiny's desire.
♥♥
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Author notes
pic inspired
A contest entry
- ~* The Bridge to... *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Path Of Promise
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading~which I did several times...I kept getting the words: Gone with the Wind
and then read piece again, afterwards seeing actor: Humphrey Bogart separately but felt like a reference to his demeanor
I am shown his face with cigarette in mouth then him talking to Ingrid Bergman~
Hopefully this makes sense~
Powerful images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and pulled~
and these pebbles that we stumble upon
are only growing pains nourished by our love.
Magnificent Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Ah, my biggest of dreamers who dances with dasies and showers in a mist of dandilion seeds -- May this spring bring to the surface and into your arms the summer of joy that waits for you.
Love, Big bro Tom
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Bro, I have been offline for a few days due to comp malfunction
and what a joy it is to return to see such a beautiful comment from my Bro
Lynda
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