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The Bridge Between Heaven And Earth

 

 

 

 

 

Walking through this lonely path,

the bridge between Heaven and Earth.

I always thought that it would be crowded,

but I find that it is lost and forgotten.

I fall to my knees and ask the Lord why I am here.

 

I hear no voices but feel a sudden breath of air.

It flies through and around me like a windstorm.

I feel my heart as it beats in excitement.

My body begin to rise into the air and I fly,

into the arms of a million angels.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

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Picture Prompt
Credit: credit Jesse Earle in the AC

A contest entry

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  • cherche -d -ame
    May 19, 2008

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    jeremy, how beautiful and serenely you described this. It brought a feeling of complete peace. Congratulations on the well deserved Gold,
    reenie


  • Li snuffles
    May 19, 2008

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    Wow! congradulations on gold, this piece is really beautiful, spiritual and religious, i just simply loved reading it!

    "lost and forgotten" this was rather sad, depicting the uman race for what they are, greedy etc., we all suffer and allow ourselves to get tempted by so uch sin we jepordise our place in heaven.

    But, i love how you described your entry into heaven, 'arms of a million angels, breath of air, excitement, flying...' beautiful imagery

    ...xxx


  • Desire gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: The Bridge Between Heaven And Earth
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading~ which I did several times...
    When I got to the last line in the first stanza, my eyes swelled as tears fell onto my keyboard~
    I kept hearing: Hold On! Hold On!
    as if pleading with You to stay Strong and NOT want to disappear when things get rough
    Kept seeing butterflies~ hundreds of them as if migrating~ Monarch- some get trapped in webs while others get eaten by predators while in flight but they still continue on, continue on their mission- instinct takes over their drive
    Hopefully this makes sense~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    **Oh just a reminder: please credit Jesse Earle in the AC- for using his picture~ Thankies

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    I fall to my knees and ask the Lord why I am here.
    ~*~
    My body begin to rise into the air and I fly,
    into the arms of a million angels.
    Magnificent Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~