Hello?
Do you remember me?
Do you remember the time we had?
Do you think it was great?
Do you think I’m sorry?
Can you please forgive me?
Even after what I put you through?
Why are you so kind to me?
Have you ever wished for me back?
As often as I do?
Oh, Only once a season?
Of course you do, what was I thinking?
Do you know I think of you everyday?
Do you know I cry myself to sleep?
What would you do if I died?
What if I died for you?
Is there something I should know?
Can I ask you a serious question?
Do you want to get back together?
...
One question too much, huh?
Author notes
An ex and I had feelings for each other as she left for Australia. This was a one-sided convo I dreamt up.
A contest entry
- You Don't Know Me... by artisticxpoetry.
900 points, ended May 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is amazing! a very simple piece, yet filled with such great depth! i love the forth stanza... brilliant work there, and your last stanza, last line, stunning! >.< keep penning!
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Do you know I think of you everyday?
Do you know I cry myself to sleep?
What would you do if I died?
What if I died for you?
-that's my favorite verse in the poem! I love the feeling that this poems shows. I hope to see more good poetry from you and to see you around. I always have contests going on, you should enter a poem sometime. I am pretty sure that you will win some!
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aw, this is really cute, I'm glad you entered. Good luck! And thank you for entering and following the rules
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