Starving pale woman
Hair like blood
She has tangled herself in guilt
Paranoia eating her up
Can't handle it
Suicide
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/20/=] [Prompt is up already] by LeilaJayne.
300 points, ended May 14, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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I take it the poem's a promt from the photo. Good job.
Great Poem very imaginative...
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this poem is amazing. great job
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good
I cannot fathom the inner meaning.You have to explain it to me.particularly the background in which it was written,surely you seem to have a situation in mind.I tend to be more graphic and detailed.Kindly visit some of my poetry. -
What a morid picture. You're words really brought it to life. That is, in showing the reasoning behind the toture in the picture. Nice work. Straight forward and simple.
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this poem goes great with the pic! good job
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oh god, theyre getting darker and dark. lol.
i like how well the feeling of guilt blends in with the sucide. the words fit.
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Wow.. this is really interesting.. I really like this hun.. great job!!
Angel
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I like this one =)
Its one of those shorter poems but its actually better than some of the longer ones I've read.
Great Job! <3
[Katee]
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dark and great. a great poem, you seem to be able to accomplish so much in short poems. i really like your take on this guilt can be a horrible thing
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hey i like this one and the pic realy seez it all and sums it up realy good!!!
>bre-wit-luv<
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Wow
A short drak write seeping with guilt and depression. So much said in so few words. Penned by a true poet
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sounds like me on drugs.lol
no, but in all realness this is a good like one.
i love the "she", i can see her as being a sad mofo.
depresing...
loved it,
KNIGHT TIME
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OMG! This is terrific. I love it! Its so true.
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Holy **** I LOOVE THE PICTURE! And the poem is soo true, guilt can kill you Very nice!
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