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her first real kiss

as i hold her in my arms i look into
her eyes and see true love as i say
i love you and i lean in toward her
and press my lips against hers and
give her a real kiss as we pull
away just for a moment to look
into each others eyes as we say
to one another i love you and
thats a promise and i give her
one last kiss before i have to
go then i turn and walk away
into the shadows as i wake up and realized
it was all just a dream =(


deticated to: my hunnybunny of 11 months seaira

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  • SouthpawGA
    January 24
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  • Ratfink
    January 23

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    Aww this poem is really sweet. I can see you put a lot of emotion into it. I really, really like it. Made me think of my love.