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Merry Christmas Tanka

Merry Christmas all
Hoping that you have a ball
Lots of Christmas cheer
With friends and family dear
A healthy,happy New Year.

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Written December 21st, 2003

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  • BeautifullyBroken42
    December 10, 2007
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    Yay this is a wonderful poem and it ryhmes!! Good luck!!


  • Elvenfairy
    November 29, 2007
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    Very nice poem. It reminds me of my Uncle's holiday speeches, short and sweet. The only diffrence is that he is usually drunk when he gives his speeckes and I don't think you were drunk when you wrote this *although you never know * Cute poem. Thanks for entering my contest. Merry christmas and good luck!


  • islekine gold member
    November 25, 2007
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    Well done!

    And a special message...Thanks for your entry!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • smileywinks
    December 23, 2003
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    AWE! this should be enterd into my first contest, check it out!
    LOL Loved this!
    Hey thankyou for your kind words on my writing! I really needed that today! It helped me smile!
    XOXO Veronica


  • UncleSpace
    December 21, 2003
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    lovely

    This is so nice, a warm and traditional type poem in Tanka form that simply says it all. Merry Christmas to you Sir, I hope it's a beautiful one.

    Unc


  • Sherry gold member
    December 21, 2003
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    Sweet thoughts Gramps and meanings...check (healthy) sweetie word......I know it was just a typo I do that also. Hope you have a great Christmas. Least its warm in sunny FL I know white christmas are n ice but I think I miss sometimes anywhere from 6o-75 degrees even 50s would be a improvement up here. Which it may get to tomorrow. But been cold this way time of year. Love,Sherry
    Edited on Dec 21, 2:51 p.m. because ''.

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