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Wake Up Call



Giants become humble,
when truth of how small
they are falls upon them.

Rocked at foundation
of reality, as Mother
smiles a warning to
humanity.  

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  • acalmingvoice
    May 17, 2008

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    WOW

    WOW, what can I say, A warning all should heed....great take on the prompt.....congrats on the bronze.....looked like gold to me, but then again I am just a LITTLE baised.!.!.!....LOL.....LOVE YOU TO THE MOON & BACK


  • Grey Mouser
    May 14, 2008

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    With just a shrug her force is felt and the dust settles slowly over a newly changed landscape. While small insects scurry to resume their struggle on her shoulders. Well written dear, expounding a true message in the wake of such disasters that have fallen on the heads of humanity. Best to you!

    Love,
    Mouser
    Sun and stars shine no brighter than you!


  • buffsab99
    May 14, 2008

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    Excellent

    Beautiful take on this prompt. You captured this so well my friend. Congrats on winning bronze


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Ahh those warnings we should heed.. and yet do not seem to!

    Another fantastic write!! Congrats on the bronze!


  • Mark McNulty
    May 13, 2008

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    Nicely done. It felt quite deep for the limited number of words and that is always an achievement to take pride in. Thanks for entering, I enjoyed this quite a bit!

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