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The Switch Is Just South Of Your Navel.

S l  o  w  l  y,
speaking in a tongue,
gentle beyond understanding,
causing your limbs to part,
and your tenderest skin to quiver
as I slip eagerly
into a furrow
far below your brow,
seeking out your chad of flesh,
swollen with urgent need
that peeks from
beneath a flesh hood,
suckling you like a pacifier,
and pacify you I shall,
painting Oh's and
sweet words of love,
in silky wet strokes,
all up, down and all around,
that perfect center of lust,
as you lock me tightly,
in the vise of your thighs,
muffling your sighs,
and your soprano cries,
and ride my face
to a glorious place,
as my fingers
milk your buttocks,
burying my tongue deep
inside you and then slowly
withdrawing and
climbing vertcially
back to your button of bliss,
over and over,
driving your hips skyward,
causing your nipples
to stand erect
like the stone heads
on Easter Island,
your sweet split 
vertical grin
a  lovely medusa,
turning my own
extended flesh to stone,
soon it will impale you,
in deep thick thrusts,
but not before,
you melt all over
my lips and tongue,
and beg me offer you,
something much larger,
with penetrating eyes,
pleading as I rise,
and grant your request,
slipping joyously into
your snug heated clasp.

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  • GarneT
    June 23, 2008
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    That was...great. Good luck x


  • jul
    May 26, 2008
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    that's hot! Good Job. Good luck!


  • WingedWolf
    May 15, 2008

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    it's over!!! I was getting into it, too. Dang. Great job hitting the southern spot. And love the color choice... I don't normally say that, so you know it added to it. Great job.

    Oh, and good luck.


  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 15, 2008

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    you got down with this here and there you brought the melodies to bed keep on writing your moods i guess the more stimulated the more heated you may get to pen a more intensifying release

    D


  • frownsnfreckles
    May 14, 2008

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    yep, I think that would do it! Wonderfully descriptive, sensual and erotic without reducing the tone from pure artistic hues.


  • Li snuffles
    May 14, 2008

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    This was amazing, it was really vivid and you could feel the emotions and passions you have for your women, wow!

    good luck in the contest


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    Damn if you don't know how to heat up a page and heighten the senses of heated passion with just a few strokes of the keyboard. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors . Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der

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