Exchanging looks of hatred,
through a transparent pane.
Provoking a reaction,
from something much greater.
Frustrating it,
to the point of despair...
But what if the glass were to break?
Author notes
30 words: Pic prompt
Credit: Shark by TheOneSethCohen at DeviantArt
A contest entry
- 10/30/20 QUICKIE (PIF) Pic Inspired by Mark McNulty.
850 points, ended May 13, 2008, 5 entries
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What did you think
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I would have liked to see the picture that prompted this poem.
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The picture was there...but i dont have gold membership anymore so it disappeared xxx
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well worthy of gold, thanks for sharing thoughts that linger.
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A neat little gem here. It has the feel of an extended proverb to me, and I have always been a fan of the proverb. Thanks for the entry!
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OHHHH... indeed!!! What if it were to break!! Very thought provoking ... and I see a metaphor for not pushing people past their limits too!
Awesome sis!!
xx
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Very good poem hehe me likey lots =)
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