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is your semen
acidic

or basic?

can irony be found
in that which is intrinsic

whether the folly to
it
found

or forgotten?

is the vaginal environment
a hostile one

or does it
more often

play host?

am i as devoid of emotion
as the cavity

betwixt my legs

is devoid of nerve endings -

- this dead and hollow hole

that serves as life giving
canal

(hallowed ground?)




i smell

the sterility of bleach

in that

which is anything but











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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    Whoa. This was out there... even for you!
    I found the ending of this one difficult to take (maybe because I'm so.... protective... about that).

    I did enjoy it immensely though, and found this to be one of the most original (if not THE most) poem I've ever come across.

    You aren't afraid to lay it all out there are ya?