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Exponentials

Missing image
staring into nature
the smallness of our existence
is magnified,

and yet it is man's ego alone
that is expounded exponentially,

to the detriment--

of his humanity

and his survival...




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Shark by TheOneSethCohen at DeviantArt
http://theonesethcohen.deviantart.com/art/Shark-61084798

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    Perfectly written...many of us seemed to go the same direction, yet you did it with so much more depth and creativity...
    Well done as always, my dear.
    Best,
    mystic


  • Mark McNulty
    May 13, 2008

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    Oooh... very deep. A great observation here and communicated quite artistically. Well done... thank you for entering.