staring into nature
the smallness of our existence
is magnified,
and yet it is man's ego alone
that is expounded exponentially,
to the detriment--
of his humanity
and his survival...
Author notes
Shark by TheOneSethCohen at DeviantArt
http://theonesethcohen.deviantart.com/art/Shark-61084798
A contest entry
- 10/30/20 QUICKIE (PIF) Pic Inspired by Mark McNulty.
850 points, ended May 13, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Perfectly written...many of us seemed to go the same direction, yet you did it with so much more depth and creativity...
Well done as always, my dear.
Best,
mystic

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Oooh... very deep. A great observation here and communicated quite artistically. Well done... thank you for entering.



