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By Moonlight

Each night she awaits one,
who can appease her appetite.
Longing, for the touch, glance, feeling...

Awaiting you by the window sill, like you said.
Still you don't come!
Again she awaits the one...

The one who'll satisfy her hunger.

Author notes

i had to remove a few words, but i think it still went well

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  • It was beautifully written! Love the imagery and ideas of her waiting for her lover, the one who will satisfy her every desire. Nice and sensual. Great write hun!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck
  • Yay you reserved hehe I know you will come up with something beautiful!