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Hold My Hand

blessed i am for i met you,
who can give smile in my heart.
through thick and thin we are there,
lifting up each other as well.

we are bound for each other,
with no limitations and hesitations.
we share laughter and tears,
through all the circumstances of ourlives.

my dearest friend put this in your heart,
ourselves met because God has a purpose.
my dearest friend remember this,
i will always be here for you till the end.

my shoulders will always be there for you,
to cry and lean on whenever you need.
my arms will always be ready,
to shield and comfort you in times you want to.

my hand will be forever be here for you,
for a helping hand is what you have in me.
my words maybe invisible but make sense,
these words are for advices you can share with me.

above all i am not the only one who is there for you,
for there is God that we can depend on anytime.
He is always there staring on us,
watching and guiding us all the way.

you may call me in times you need a friend,
but only God is the one where we can pull our strength.
many loves you my dearest friend,
not only me and God but others as well.

you may never feel how much they care,
but they are silently worried about you.
hold my hand and i will let you see,
there are more things in life that we can be happy.


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  • lightswitches
    July 31, 2008
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    I liked this, but I have a personal issue.
    In the contests that I have done (... two). I tend to be REALLY hard on the ones that are entered in what appears to be well over ten contests. I mean this is a nice write, but. Oh blah.
    Nonetheless, thanks for entering.


  • Brit-Girl
    July 27, 2008
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    this is a nice spiritual write
    thank you for your entry


  • Hope Angel silver member
    June 17, 2008
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    This is so sweet. Very uplifting.Thanks for entering


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    THis is such a lovely write and so touching and uplifting, especially for the person who it was meant for. Well done for this and thank you for entering my contest.


  • LoverBoy4u
    June 4, 2008
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    Thanks for joining my contest
    i like this poem from heart


  • jackysunshine
    June 3, 2008
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    Lovely words

    The kindness and compassion in your words are an inspiration for us all.


  • DeathlyAngel
    June 2, 2008
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    You really showed how much u care about ur friend. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck


  • unanswered
    May 28, 2008
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    This is a beautiful tribute to a friend. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • Ephiphany
    May 22, 2008
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    Great write...

    very impressed thank you and good luck in the contest.
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  • Breathless Ballons
    May 15, 2008
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    Wow! I love it! SO good!!!!

    Good luck & Thanks for entering!! ♥


  • i-love-my-bra
    May 15, 2008
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    good luck. i like this, i especially like the last stanza. it really shows how good friends are.


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    May 14, 2008
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    great right and thanks for taking the time to enter. good luck!


  • SilencefillsMySoul
    May 14, 2008

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    What a nice tribute to a friend. I love the way your flow went here. Thank you for entering my contest.

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