A rawness is open within me
I don't know what to do
I can't go on like this much longer
It's as if the world is rubbing salt in my wounds
Oh God, please help me get past this
I don't know how much more I can take
I wish someone was my hero
I can't fight this all on my own
But no one is there to save me
I don't see a point to life
We live only to die
The idea of life is worthless
My heart is broken to pieces
My mind races faster then me
My body is numb as the dead
My life is in jeopardy
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we all need a hero at times and when there isn't anyone to rescue us from the darkness it can be very scary. Thank you for the insightful entry.
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Thank you for your much heartfelt and insightful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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very nice
very ncie i kno this feeling well. the need for someone to help u get through someth9ing bc u can't do it alone. good work -
man this grabbed my heart, onderful write
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this is really heart wrenching. but a very good write. good job
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